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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-05-19 01:42 AM



Me Too
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sing to me of love
Caress me with a smile
Say I'm all you've needed
for such a long, long while

Hold me in your arms
Talk to me of dreams
Tell me what makes you laugh
though silly it seems

Whisper to me of thoughts
you've held too long inside
Tell me of your ambitions
tell me with pride

Tell me how you love me
then when your heart is through
listen as I repeat what you've said
Those are the things ... I also feel for you






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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devina
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Cali
1 posted 2000-05-19 01:47 AM


This is just perfect Marge...romantic and touching for sure!!! Hope all is well with you Ms. Sunshine....he he

Love you!!
~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Corinne
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2 posted 2000-05-19 01:51 AM


Very lovely and uplifting, Marge!

Corinne

Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-05-19 02:25 AM


very eloquently said Marge, loved your poem.

 

tracie66
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4 posted 2000-05-19 04:03 AM


Marge you always have the most beautiful things to say and I love to read every word   thankyou for being such a perfect poet with awesome talent.
Tracie~  


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



vphantom
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5 posted 2000-05-19 04:13 AM


Marge,

Everytime I read your work, you just make me wanna melt.  You writing is exquisite and I can only wish I can write like you.  The person you wrote this poem for is a very lucky person.

Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the
   eyes confess the secrets of the heart.--
                               St. Jerome


Denise
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6 posted 2000-05-19 10:23 AM


Beautiful and sweet! Love it!

Denise

Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-05-19 11:03 AM


Marge, your title encompasses the "secret message" I give to my loved one when I cannot "talk" at work...

as always, you are an inspiration!

Danny Holloway
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8 posted 2000-05-19 11:14 AM


Marge, you are such a romanatic!  But then, aren't all poets?  Very nice poem!
thanks for the e-mail.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2000-05-19 11:26 AM


Whisper into my ears, words tender,
Make the melodies of my heart escape my lips,
Sing to me, loving lyrical wonder,
Take me in your arms, my soul flips.

Make me feel loved as I do to you,
Speak to me, sweet little verses,
Then hear me say the words 'I love you',
Lets each other be in love rehearses...

Marge, you are ever so romantic, I really like reading your poems, so soothing, and lovely flow....

Regards,
Sudhir

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 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-19-2000).]

Meadowmuse
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10 posted 2000-05-19 11:33 AM


Me too, Marge, me too! I love it too!!  

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2000-05-19 10:05 PM


Marge~
Perfect title!!!  I see that you are a romantic at heart, my friend.  Very inspiring writing!!  
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-05-20 06:05 AM


Devina~
MsSunshine is just fine, cutie pie.

Corinne~
Thank you, dear lady.

RoseBud~
I thank you so much, my dear.

Tracie~
HUGS from my heart.

VPhantom~
How I appreciate your thoughts.  Thank you so much for your kindness.

Denise~
You are always there to lift our spirits.
Thank you.

Danny~
I plead guilty to both charges !

Sudhir~
I am pleased to give you the pleasure.
Thank you so much for your inspired response.

Claire~

Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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