Open Poetry #7 |
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Me Too |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Me Too ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sing to me of love Caress me with a smile Say I'm all you've needed for such a long, long while Hold me in your arms Talk to me of dreams Tell me what makes you laugh though silly it seems Whisper to me of thoughts you've held too long inside Tell me of your ambitions tell me with pride Tell me how you love me then when your heart is through listen as I repeat what you've said Those are the things ... I also feel for you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is just perfect Marge...romantic and touching for sure!!! ![]() Love you!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very lovely and uplifting, Marge! Corinne |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very eloquently said Marge, loved your poem. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge you always have the most beautiful things to say and I love to read every word ![]() Tracie~ ![]() Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Marge, Everytime I read your work, you just make me wanna melt. You writing is exquisite and I can only wish I can write like you. The person you wrote this poem for is a very lucky person. Vphantom --The face is the mirror of the mind and the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-- St. Jerome |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sweet! Love it! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, your title encompasses the "secret message" I give to my loved one when I cannot "talk" at work... as always, you are an inspiration! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marge, you are such a romanatic! But then, aren't all poets? Very nice poem! thanks for the e-mail. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Whisper into my ears, words tender, Make the melodies of my heart escape my lips, Sing to me, loving lyrical wonder, Take me in your arms, my soul flips. Make me feel loved as I do to you, Speak to me, sweet little verses, Then hear me say the words 'I love you', Lets each other be in love rehearses... Marge, you are ever so romantic, I really like reading your poems, so soothing, and lovely flow.... Regards, Sudhir < !signature--> Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-19-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Me too, Marge, me too! I love it too!! ![]() ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Perfect title!!! I see that you are a romantic at heart, my friend. Very inspiring writing!! ![]() LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ MsSunshine is just fine, cutie pie. Corinne~ Thank you, dear lady. RoseBud~ I thank you so much, my dear. Tracie~ HUGS from my heart. VPhantom~ How I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you so much for your kindness. Denise~ You are always there to lift our spirits. Thank you. Danny~ I plead guilty to both charges ! Sudhir~ I am pleased to give you the pleasure. Thank you so much for your inspired response. Claire~ ![]() Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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