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Message From The Gods(Combined works by Isis and Sven)
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Message From The Gods(Combined works by Isis and Sven) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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This is a poem written by both Sven and myself. Hope you all enjoy it as much as we enjoyed writing it!! From his palace on high the great God Ra, Saw that the world was a dismal place, Not full of his light and love, As it was when he created this space. So he searched the world, Heaven and Earth, For one with the same vision as he, Finding nothing, out of the darkness he created Isis, Sovereign of the Spirit, daughter of the Earth. Together as one they stand, Defying all evil and hatred, Showering the world with a mystical love, So the human demise is never fated. Standing with his child of creation, His love her sword, her light her shield, They rescue those in need of strength, To evil they will NEVER yeild! Their love of life brings hope to all, From age to age their battle rages on, Defenders of love, keepers of the light, Bringing dawn to the darkest of nights. So all young lovers remember the tale told here today, From Isis and Ra take your cue, Journey the road of truth and love, And there will be magic in all that you do. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and there is magic coming from the pens of you two. this is PERFECT and how great of a match up two of my favs together. great poem guys!! more more...encore  later-poet-gators jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nice, nice, work you guys, what a combo, great allusion and imagery--serenity salutes. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
You know, when my son was only 6 months old, he loved to point up at the sun and say "Ra, Ra, Ra," over and over--and we hadn't told him anything about the Gods yet. Magic and love, indeed....  This was an excellent poem; you two should work together more often. I loved it. Christina =^..^= |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You guys make a great team. Very well done. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-19-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Great team work, fantastic poem. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone!!! I hope we do get to do more together soon  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
I loved this one..and by two of my favorite poets. Wonderfully Written you two...I agree..encore encore!!! daniel |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis and Sven, Great poem you two!! Not surprised to see this tandem....your styles compliment each other well. LW |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . we figured since everybody else was collaborating on poems, then why not us? Glad that you all liked it as much as we enjoyed working together. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Daniel and Lone Wolf yes our writings seem to compliment the other. Stay tuned maybe we'll do another soon I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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