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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Thoughts, little more than feelings. Thoughts, little less than an idea. Wondering if what I'm thinking can be considered as an obscurity. Curiosity abounds, darkness sets in and clouds my mind. Making me ponder the bain of my existence. Thoughts, little more than feeling. Thoughts, little less than a dream. I dream casually, and randomly wander thru my mind. I have to run from the fears in my head. Trying to hide how nervous I am. Thoughts, little more than feeling. Thoughts, little more than hope. Hope in a world, hope in a dream, hope that someone believes in me. Nervous excitement about love and desire. Idle chat seems to make me perspire. So wound up in my own little world, someone please rescue me........... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is good, very "thought"ful!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I think that we all write from our own world, though it is important not to forget that we belong to a larger world as well, as you can see you got me thinking, I will shut up now. Great poem. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
epoet what a cool name! This is great! We can all wish to be rescued, but it is inside ourselves to rescue ourselves --) netswan |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you for the comments. I appreciate and invite any criticisms you might have as it helps me to see what I might be lacking as a poet. I'll try to keep up the good work. I also have some poetry in the corner pub, where I feel right at home. P. J. Kotrch |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thoughts everyone ponders! I loved your poem . So true it is. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely poem, I hope to read more from you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you for the comments. I appreciate them very much. I have more in the pub forum if you are interested. P. J. Kotrch |
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