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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Listen to the rain beating, drop, drop, Listen to the clock ticking, Tick tock, tick tock, Listen to the birds tweeting, Tweet, tweet, Listen to the crickets singing, Tweak,tweak, Hear my heart beating? [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-19-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a cute poem. Very creative! ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
that was really lovely, clever and cute. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem!!!!!!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Hope that heart of yours is not really bleeding, my friend. Love your poem...short and sweet. Excellent concept!! LW |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for your replies! sometimes short is sweeter! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So to listen to your heart beating, I would have to put my ear to your chest..... Alrighty then. I'm listening. Too much running or something I must be getting a hormone testosteron overload. and yes I can't spell and to lazy to look it up in the dictionary, but I'm still listening. I think I hear a beat.... well maybe not, just a little longer.  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I know i responded to this once, but i found myself coming back for another read because it is so touching in simplicity, and so nicely written.....so back up it goes, listen to it soaring! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
** big nice sigh *** Very nice girl! Short, but definately sweet. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i took this one way when i first read it. i thought it was a little bit of anrgy pleading. i thought that, of all the romantic time your spending with this whoever, YOU aren't being heard. then i read it again after reading the replies, and i thought this. the both of you (assuming this is written to/about a special someone) can hear each other in everything. even the beating of each others hearts in the simple rhythms of your surrounding. now i can't decide which perception i liked better! i dug it. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Parker...it is beating so loud that you don't have to put your head to my chest...so loud that it over rides every sound, every poem, distraction around...Yes you do hear a beat...just recite some more of your beautiful poetry me likes it alot!Danny..you amaze me...your so sweet and kind..thanks for always reading my poems, I appreciate you! Jen...your poetry is so creative lately, I am alot like you, like you said before, I have an imaginary muse to inspire me...but there are some here that iinspire me also..Thanks for reading Ethan...you read my thoughts and my heart, it is a two sided poem, and it depends on which way your heart is seeing it...you saw both sides and my choice is the latter explanation, thanks for your reply |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
RH-- i liked this one a lot! u are quite creative with your poetry. i like the different ways you get your points across. this one had a upbeat note to it and made me smile. thanks much! take care, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Amy..sorry bout that, you snuck in there, Thanks for being so sweet, to say that about my poetry,I am humbled, Thank you for reading, helping me to feel that my poems mean something to someone..Glad to have made you smile |
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