Open Poetry #7 |
Which Face |
David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Which Face? Which visage would thou choose to weep for me? Which face to serve said purpose meets its end? And would thou also cry on bended knee To pray such prayers on which my soul depends? And would thou smugly sit and nod assent? Aware too well of downfall close at hand. For shameful lack of heeding counsel sent Spared not your souls the pity this demands. Why then should one attempt to live their life And ponder over anxious word or deed? When guidance leads to banishment of strife While others plot and plan the life you lead? Forgive me for such blatant arrogance And show me please which path to follow hence. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Alot of questions in that poem, and I think the only one who can answer them is yourself. That was powerful, got me think about myself and my own masks/faces. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Masterfully written, David. This is solemn and beautifully expressed. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
We are truly the only ones who can direct our own lives. Others may advise us, with good intentions or ill, but ultimately the decisions are our own. This is very powerful, David. Wonderful sonnet! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Which visage would thou choose to weep for me? Which face to serve said purpose meets its end? And would thou also cry on bended knee To pray such prayers on which my soul depends? And would thou smugly sit and nod assent? Aware too well of downfall close at hand. ---------- thou asks thy self the hard questions dont thou tis too bad I am clueless to answer LOL excellent well written thoughts here. jm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I always look forward to your posts, David2. This one reminds me of someone, another poet whose style is somewhat similar, always questioning and serving up thoughts supreme. Corinne |
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