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~ silken pleasures ~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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~ silken pleasures ~ falling darkness and silk light glistens candles burn emit a glow heated kisses with silk lips meeting sighs escape as passions grow blue eyes watch him silk fingers tracing gentle curves on ivory skin his hands on flesh and silk gown rustles baring thighs to touch within two bodies joined and silk sheets shimmer flowing soft like subtle tears quiet murmurs as now silk whispers fall upon her waiting ears < !signature--> To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
A very expresionate poem, with great use of descriptive metaphors . I liked it very much . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hubbita hubbita yowza ying ying egch egch rowr i liked this one lots! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this flows through the mind like silk...I can almost hear the rustling fabrics...sigh...very happy for you my friend  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corazon...thank you dear, I appreciate that angels wing and walt...thanks bunches you two |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Ruth, smooth as silk! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Ruth, this is silky eroticism! The only problem i have with it is that it's ~~~~~~~TO SHORT~~~~~~~ more silky exploration please! ~~very nice indeed~~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How soft and lovely! Visually stimulating because of the imagery you use...I like it very much!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny...what more do you want? Thank you for your kind comments Sharon and Denise...thank you both so much |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hoot Owl, WOW!!! So passionate and erotic!!!! Just lovely...sigh.... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This was very sensuous! I could feel the silkiness! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
AWESOME! I really liked the flow of this one! Thanks for the read =) --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth, I think that silk becomes you! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
** pant pant ** It's nice to know that 2,000 silkworms did not live their lives in vain. This is exquisite, Ruth... |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Ruth~ How Wonderful!!!!!! This very delicate and gently flowing rhythm paints such a beautiful picture of passion's flames! I love this one, dear! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very lovely ... I'll have to read this again before I head off to bed tonight ... yuh never know ! Rex |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone |
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