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Le Morte D'amor
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Le Morte D'amor |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Somewhere in the night Someone will cry Waiting for love to die Neon lights won’t illuminate Darkened streets where aimless souls, Masses of flesh await Filling little vacant holes They won’t hesitate Shiny diamonds of dirty glass Sparkle once and once only Fading in twilight fast A little lost and lonely, But too bright to last So much given away too soon Can never be retrieved Where once begged for highest noon, Now all are grieved With a fainting swoon Somewhere in the night Someone did cry Waiting for love to die |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"The Death of Love" Ah, man 'So much given away to soon" love that line. This was great. Wonderful poem. Michael |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks Michael, sincerely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shiny diamonds of dirty glass Sparkle once and once only Fading in twilight fast A little lost and lonely, But too bright to last So much given away too soon Can never be retrieved Where once begged for highest noon, Now all are grieved With a fainting swoon Somewhere in the night Someone did cry Waiting for love to die ------------------- you are so cool, as is this poem... man, I love this one... very cool imagery and depth, and the title is perfect presented this way. Can you say my name in French(smile). excellent jer, and always worth the wait.  stalking you while swooning, your jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I am with michael on this one....that line says so much about this hurry hurry world and what it has done to the art and passion of being in love...and not properly grown, it dies untimely....great writing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JML, Good form, good words, good poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ Truly captivating. 'Somewhere in the night Someone did cry Waiting for love to die' Yeah. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I'm glad you decided to post this one today...just lovely. ~ Claire |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JML, superb my friend. . . it's nice to see that there are still some of us that carry the banner for passion and romance. . .we are truly a dying breed. . . Excellent poem!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
awesome. Liked the way this has that "beat" style to it, ala the 1960's. Corinne |
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