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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-05-17 02:32 PM



*this is a repost of mine from teen #2 but I havent posted in this forum for a while now so I thought I would put this in.


I lay my head apon my desk
Head in arms, I make a nest
I seem to lay my soul to rest
Each time I think of you

I feel like I can almost fly
When I stare into thine eyes
From my mouth escapes a sigh...
I know this love is true

She came to me just like a dove
Someone to save me from above
And now I have someone to love
A love long overdue...


 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
1 posted 2000-05-17 06:46 PM


Very nice this little poem
The way you write about your love
must make the heart melt away
Keep on nesting

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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