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MagnoliaBlue
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0 posted 2000-05-17 01:16 AM


~Out past the sky~

Perhaps we can meet way up high
Past the treetops and out past the sky

In a magical land of make believe
With sweet dreams our hearts weave

Take my hand and hold on tight
We’ll weave these dreams for tonight

In your arms I will drift this day
To that place up high and far away

Where we can talk and laugh and touch
And make those memories that mean so much

©1999~CJB~



 

© Copyright 2000 June Blanchard - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-17 01:18 AM


MagnoliaBlue~
Firstly, I LOVE your name !
Secondly, welcome to Passion's !
Thirdly, nice thoughts in this poem !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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2 posted 2000-05-17 02:02 AM


Excellent Magnolia. . .

I'll be there in a moment. . . *getting out his wings*. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


MagnoliaBlue
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3 posted 2000-05-17 05:18 PM


Thank you Marge...Nice to be accepted .


Sir Sven...Thanks !...Fly over and

flash your great smile and eye-twinkle

thing...
                            
                                    AWAY!!!
                               AND
                         UP
                  UP,

    AND IT'S   ^


MagnoliaBlue  

 

DestinysCharm
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4 posted 2000-05-17 05:25 PM


This is beautiful, and written so well. I look forward to more from you.
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 2000-05-17 06:39 PM


I'd like to agree with all three things that Marge said.
~~nice poem~~
and, thank you for responding to mine.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-05-17 06:46 PM


This is lovely Magnolia Blue ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

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