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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
a penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind a man without depression .. is always hard to find some would rather melt a plastic face.. not quite so ugly i know..but it will pass for disgrace as you appear..in the words..in the fear can you admit..under god's swallowing eye.. your the worst thing going... you need to mourn your life away.. already we're bored...of the pretty in you but we must smile..and shake your hand our hidden agenda..is the law of the land "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind a man without depression .. is always hard to find --------------- can you admit..under god's swallowing eye.. your the worst thing going... you need to mourn your life away.. already we're bored...of the pretty in you but we must smile..and shake your hand our hidden agenda..is the law of the land ------------ damn Jac...this is AWESOME... way cool poem my friend...very cool very strong and well expressed thoughts. i really like this one. later Jac-gator jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"A penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind." Very nice writing Jackal. James |
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