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Open Poetry #7

Shadow Creeper

Brandyn Sand
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 82
Columbia, SC

0 posted 2000-05-17 07:41 AM

Shadow Creeper on the wall,
Across my flesh your fingers crawl;
Your touch - it takes my breath away.
Just for once I wish you’d stay.

Shadow Creeper take my hand;
Lead me to your promised land -
A place I never chanced to be
Until I felt you loving me.

Shadow Creeper in my dreams,
Our time is ever short it seems,
For outside soon will come the dawn
And in a moment you’ll be gone.

Shadow Creeper in my heart,
You’ve given me a fresh new start,
And I look forward to the day
When you won’t ever fade away.

© Brandyn Sand

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-05-17 07:44 AM

Lovely work...very evocative Brandyn.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-05-17 07:46 AM

I just loved the title
Loved the poem even more
Liz

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-05-17 07:52 AM

Brandyn~
I enjoyed this and the images
on display. The charisma of the
shadows is compelling.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-05-17 08:06 AM

Wonderful writing...James

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