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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-05-16 11:25 PM


Time seems to be going by so fast
Have you noticed? The days seems like they
are cut in half?
Seems like the clock is working at warp speed.
Have you noticed?
The years fly by as if on stage
watching act III, then final act is set.
Here I sat in such a daze wandering about
with no chartered course.
Yet time seems to be all mapped out.
Going, going, with no way out.
Time doesn't seem to be on our side
or have you noticed?
I suggest you take a look at the second hand that
seems to be going even faster round and round,
Oh if time would just slow down.
Maybe all the world wouldn't be in such a rush
if time would just hesitate for the month of May.
Have you noticed?

So might I suggest in my dismay, that we halt just an hour in each day, so we may all go out and play!



 

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-05-17 12:20 PM


my my how time does fly when you're having fun  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-05-17 07:26 PM


Thanks Jeffrey sounds like you've been there too. It seems to me when i'm truly more alive at night for some reason.

 

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