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A Rhyming Accrostic Alliteration Nightmare!
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A Rhyming Accrostic Alliteration Nightmare! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Perhaps poetry’s passion passes As asteroids and ashes Still Shakespeare’s surmise Surviving sonnets symbolize Intuition invites imagination Offering opportunity’s occasion Nobody now needs negation At acrostic’s articulation Trying tedious temptation Everybody enjoys elation Passionate poets preserve patience Overtly offering ovations Every entity entirely empathizes This tedious trial traumatizes Shakespeare sincerely sympathizes Elizabeth Santos |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is Wonderful, Elizabeth - a great piece of work here --- Such an adept grasp of the english language --) netswan |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well I am proud... Shakespeare should be too. Love the ending, Liz. Gotta admit - these are pretty fun, huh? Michael |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I agree, Shakespeare would be proud~ Great work, Liz~ Marie~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Experimentation is always good and you did it well. Love Sy |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
gives a headache even imagining trying something like this. Well done. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Elizabeth, you've got WAY too much time on your hands! WHEW! You make what I wouldn't even attempt look easy. Wonderful work.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! How do you do it, Elizabeth?! Excellent! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantanstic, Elizabeth! Alliteration is one of my favorite devices, I had to stop doing it for a while because I got the point where I unconsciously arrived at relying to heavily on it. I loved this! Corinne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wow, Liz! You could make anything to do with poetry look easy!! This is great! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
And we'd all be burnt black toast if Shakespeare ever got a hold of this thing they call "computer." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
And we'd all be burnt black toast if Shakespeare ever got a hold of this thing they call "computer." If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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