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My Special Love - maybe this has happened to you.
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My Special Love - maybe this has happened to you. |
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Aquadove New Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 1Sydney, NSW, Australia |
A POEM FOR THE ONE I LOVE When I first met you my sight was blurred, You took me by surprise, But those glasses of water made me feel a lot better, And I was yours for the night. I was lost in your gentleness, Your tenderness and passion, Each moment forever locked into my memory, The sensations felt, Everlasting. Too little time, so much to share, I had wished that time would stand still, But it cannot, so I am truly glad, For the short time that I had with you. I felt sparks fly as our lips connected, My body pressed against yours, The warmth and security I felt, Shall be with me forever more. Although we are now separated by oceans, My heart and soul belongs only to you, For the simplest song or little object, Reminds me of the night I was so lucky to share with you. Should it come that we meet again, My feelings shall not have changed, For if ever you want a lover or friend, In me you will find one and both, And forever that way it will remain.... ....They say that those who leave a place have memories sealed off by departure. I believe this is true, because I can remember every little detail of the time I had with you.  With Love Always & Forever |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
I've had these feelings before with my first love. The one love that you'll always remember and never forget. Welcome to Passion |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very well done ... really enjoyed your poem ... I feel sad for you and glad that I've never had this happen to me Welcome Rex}>{{{{o> |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Welcome to the family I really enjoyed your poem and can totally relate to it. Hope to hear more from you soon. Vphantom --------------------------------------------- The face is the mirror of the mind but the eyes confess the secrets of the heart. St. Jerome --------------------------------------------- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AquaDove~ Welcome to Passion's. Love is the one commodity that we keep - when we give it to another. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Welcome to Passions Aquadove!! Your first post hits home....sensational entrance! The memories we hold close often warm us through the coldest of nights. Thank you for sharing this piece. The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Aquadove, this is a very nice poem. Full of love and expression. The essence of poetry! Welcome to Passions! dh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Aquadove! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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