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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Sometimes Sometimes I think I love you Sometimes I'm not sure Sometimes you're the illness And sometimes you're the cure Sometimes I want to cry Sometimes I want to smile Sometimes I want to stay But just for a little while Sometimes I think too much Sometimes I don't think at all But either way I end up With my back against the wall Someday I'll figure it out But for now I'm just confused I can't understand why My heart feels so abused Sometimes I get carried away But I keep my feet on the ground Sometimes I don't know I'm lost Until I've already been found Sometimes I believe you When you say it's meant to be Sometimes I keep my eyes closed And ponder some silent mystery Somehow I can feel you With each soft, gentle breeze Thoughts of us together Put my mind at ease I remember our happy times Through each and every season It's now I know I love you I remember every reason |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, CSwtThng! Denise |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is truly a beautiful poem.  |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Thanks Denise! Your opinion means a lot to me. Thanks Insect! I'm glad you liked it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetThing~ This is exquisitely touching. 'I remember our happy times Through each and every season It's now I know I love you I remember every reason' What wonderful thoughts of your remembering. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Absolutely a beautiful poem. I feel exactly the same way. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This poem echoes my own feellings lately whenever my ex and I talk about reconciling.We truly love each other, I miss him a lot. I didn't choose the divorce, but since it happened things have changed for me a lot. I want to be with him but then I don't know if it is HIM or just being lonely...don't know if I want to go back...instead of forward. All very confusing and your poem says it very well. Thanks for sharing. |
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