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Goodbye?
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Goodbye? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Goodbye? < !signature-->Amy Kennedy I told you that I loved you and I never lied But our being together and yet not really is tearing me apart A million times a day I ask myself why Why did I fall so completely in love with you....with all my heart We know we're playing a game and someone's bound to get burned This game of love is rough and cruel Love can be sweet, and then suddenly get turned You tell me I must live within the rule You tell me to love you just for now and here Saying that you love me, and I know it is true But do you even realize my heart is breaking, as I let go a tear Do you realize how much I do love you But this isn't reality this is only a dream We aren't to be together, I can feel it in my heart And it hurts me so much it makes me want to scream Because I never want to be apart But I think its best, if I walk away I will miss you always and love you forever I will be thinking of you through the days Hoping you find true love....but forget me never You've taught me so much in such a short span I found myself again, when I thought I never would You been my love and my friend But I cant do this no more...I don't think I can I dont want to leave you, it tears me up inside But I have no other choice, than to let u go and say goodbye. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Amy what you've said here is so brave, I wish you well and someday find true love and happiness. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie-- thank you for the kind words. i too hope i find true love one day. take care and best wishes! amy   ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You've taught me so much in such a short span I found myself again, when I thought I never would You been my love and my friend But I cant do this no more...I don't think I can I dont want to leave you, it tears me up inside But I have no other choice, than to let u go and say goodbye. ------------------ if you love some one and you set them free... if they come back to you... then its meant to be. (or something like that) just keep asking your self all the right questions and give your self time to find all the answers. and BREATHE *smile* most of trust your self...you've got a really good head on those shoulders... listen to amy..head and heart... all the rest will fall into place loves ya, jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It sounds like you trust your heart, that's good! Sometimes it is best to say goodbye. Very well expressed, Amy! Denise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem!!!!! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
wow Amy....so passionate.. wonderfully written piece. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This really touched me so. Girl I have been there! Thanks for writing my emotions in this one! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
oh my!!!!!!! I can relate so much to the way you feel. I am also looking for my true love, I thought I found it only to get played like a fool. My prayers are with you. Vphantom -The face is the mirror of the mind but the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.- St. Jerome |
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