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Bunny
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-05-15 04:25 PM


Hatred.
It was all that came to me in my hours alone
It emraced me when no one else would
And it guided me to a place where I could be free
Free from my world of broken promises and hurt feelings
And hatred blinded me there, in my hour of rage
It made itself my sweet revenge
My satisfaction and reward

But I was again led astray,
Tricked by my one true friend
And so now I am here, alone
My friend no longer visits me
I am made a fool
And I am alone
For hatred indeed brought me to another world,
Just as he promised
And that world is my death
Where I must watch while others, like me, are blinded aswell
Hatred made me lash out at you,
And ruin both our lives

Hatred was a friend of mine
But I ask you, am I forgiven?

© Copyright 2000 Bunny - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-15 06:38 PM


I know what it is like to be betrayed and hurt by people you believed to be your friends,it is so easy to hate them  but in the end it gets you nowhere, as you seemed to have found out. I hope that your pain has eased. great poem. Well you seemed to have realised the errors of your ways and if no one was seriously hurt because of your mistake then in my eyes yes you are forgiven.
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-05-15 06:53 PM


Hi Bunny --- wise poem -
Lessons in life are harsh.
Hatred just eats away at your
own soul -- and it is tiring,
did you know that? It takes
lots of energy to keep hatred
up - So now that you are free of
hatred ----you can concentrate on the
good in life ---)  and have mass
energy flow to do so

You take care
netswan

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