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Open Poetry #7

Midnight's Love Song

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2000-05-15 03:53 PM

Take me down.
Take me down
you brought us around.
Take me down.
Take me down
we’ve reached the ground.

I’ve been lost in your eyes
for so very long.
I’ve been lost in mind,
knowing who you are.
You’ve been found in my soul,
and it makes me strong.

I wrap my arms around you.
I pull you in tight.
I know I can’t live without you.

So…

Take me down.
Take me down
lost in you I’ve found.
Take me down
Take me down
I’m forever bound.

I need you to be
the one I see,
when I close my eyes.
I need you to hold,
when I can sleep no more.
I need you just
to need me.

Please…

Take me down.
Take me down
lost in heavenly sound
Take me down.
Take me down
in you I’m found.

"Just thought I might try to write something nice for a change. what a strange feeling."

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There is something inside me
and I know it's good,
but understanding is misunderstood.

[This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 05-15-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-05-15 07:51 PM

Oh, Effigy~
What a delightful read.
I like it ... hope you get to feeling
'strange' more often.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

2 posted 2000-05-16 02:10 AM

Thanks Marge. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

forne_marin
Member

since 2004-04-13

Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina

3 posted 2004-04-16 12:08 PM

Wow. Very atypical of you. Very rhythmical, very metrically smooth. Not much on this one, except to say I like it.

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