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Sven
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0 posted 2000-05-15 01:59 AM


Lover of my soul, desire of my heart
Now that we're together, I never want to part
Writer of life's melody, singer of life's song
You are my home, the one I've sought for so long

Passionate and gentle lover, gentle and caring friend
You've helped my heart to heal, helped it to mend
Seeker of life's truth, knower of life's road
Let me join you on the journey, to help carry the load

Finder of life's answers, possessor of superior mind
You have taught me much, much you have helped me find
Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light
Help me to find the sun, take me away from the night. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-05-15 02:11 AM


How romantic....I'm sure you can hear my sappy sighs over here....        This flows so smoothly, like a fine wine...your lucky lady must be proud.    

Christina =^..^=

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2 posted 2000-05-15 04:59 AM


*sigh.......lovely sir.  
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3 posted 2000-05-15 08:33 AM


~Aaahhh Sven,....this is beautiful in every sense of the word. *SIGH*
Marina
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4 posted 2000-05-15 12:54 PM


Beautifully soft and sensual...she is very lucky!!!

Marina

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5 posted 2000-05-15 09:26 PM


Sven,
Lovely poem, my friend.  I truly hope you find that which you seek.  You deserve it.  Great writing...
LW


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6 posted 2000-05-15 11:11 PM


Truly beautiful.  I hope we can all find a love to take us away from the night.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~

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7 posted 2000-05-16 01:33 AM


Romance at its best Sven.....I can hear the ladies knocking at the door now  

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.



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8 posted 2000-05-16 07:14 AM


Sven, this is so lovely and romantic.
Just beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



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9 posted 2000-05-16 07:40 AM


Sven~
To find this little gem tucked in
this beautiful poem ...
was more than enough ...

'Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light'

Beautiful thought.
~*Marge*~



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Sven
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10 posted 2000-05-17 12:55 PM


Thank you all. . . your words mean a lot. . .

And First Knight?  I can't hear them knocking. . . that must be your door!  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Martie
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11 posted 2000-05-17 01:45 AM


Sven--beautiful, lovely and romantic.
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12 posted 2000-05-17 02:03 AM


Sven, wow, this lover of yours, she sounds wonderful!  She sounds like a dream come true!  I am so happy to see such warm and romantic writings from you of late!     Looks like the warm love bug bit us both about the same time, 'eh?  We're both writing the same 'ol sappy stuff!  hehehe  Glad to share the feeling with you!     You keep on writing 'em, and so will I !!  We can swap notes.  
Sven
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13 posted 2000-05-17 02:06 AM


Gen,
    aren't we already?  

And I'll share anytime. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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