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Away From the Night. . .
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Away From the Night. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Lover of my soul, desire of my heart Now that we're together, I never want to part Writer of life's melody, singer of life's song You are my home, the one I've sought for so long Passionate and gentle lover, gentle and caring friend You've helped my heart to heal, helped it to mend Seeker of life's truth, knower of life's road Let me join you on the journey, to help carry the load Finder of life's answers, possessor of superior mind You have taught me much, much you have helped me find Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light Help me to find the sun, take me away from the night. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
How romantic....I'm sure you can hear my sappy sighs over here....  This flows so smoothly, like a fine wine...your lucky lady must be proud. Christina =^..^= |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh.......lovely sir.  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aaahhh Sven,....this is beautiful in every sense of the word. *SIGH* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautifully soft and sensual...she is very lucky!!! Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Lovely poem, my friend. I truly hope you find that which you seek. You deserve it. Great writing... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Truly beautiful. I hope we can all find a love to take us away from the night. *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Romance at its best Sven.....I can hear the ladies knocking at the door now A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is so lovely and romantic. Just beautiful! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ To find this little gem tucked in this beautiful poem ... was more than enough ... 'Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light' Beautiful thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . your words mean a lot. . . And First Knight? I can't hear them knocking. . . that must be your door! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sven--beautiful, lovely and romantic. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Sven, wow, this lover of yours, she sounds wonderful! She sounds like a dream come true! I am so happy to see such warm and romantic writings from you of late!  Looks like the warm love bug bit us both about the same time, 'eh? We're both writing the same 'ol sappy stuff! hehehe Glad to share the feeling with you! You keep on writing 'em, and so will I !! We can swap notes. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Gen, aren't we already? And I'll share anytime. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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