Open Poetry #7 |
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My Precious Child |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
My Precious Child ~*Marge Tindal*~ I gaze at you my precious child and cradle you close to me. I love you for the person you will become, not just who I want you to be. I will try my best to guide you and release you without a qualm. No matter where you go, you'll find my outstretched palm. As you gain your balance, I am not afraid to let you go. With the proper guidance planted, you will return, I know. I'll gently release your hand as you approach each new roads' bend. For God only made me your mother, YOU made me your friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Oh WOW!!!! The last lines of this one almost brought a tear to my eye! How sweet! This is awesome! Thank you Marge! --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge, this touched my heart, and the last two lines squeezed it!!! It is so beautiful!!! ![]() What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Happy Mother's Day, Mom....hugs to you |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge, this is such a beautiful poem from a mothers heart. What a great mom you are, and a gifted poet too!!!! Ellie 02 |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
An exceptional poem Marge, very special, very touching. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ohhhh, this one has made me so teary! Marge you are such a wonderful person and a very special mom too! You and your children are blessed to have each other. Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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