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The Eyes Look
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The Eyes Look |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The eyes look do they really see what's hidden deep inside me The eyes look they pierce my flesh the blood flows fresh The eyes look there's no feeling there just a flat blank stare The eyes look from behind the mask removing it, enormous task The eyes look examine my bare soul try to discern my role The eyes look beneath the surface deep hidden secrets they keep The eyes look hatred fills the room my heart feels impending doom Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lone Wolf - so well written - so sad - and empty --- Hugs netswan |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,....it is an enormous task,....removing the mask. You write so well,...your words so real,..so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This really struck me at the end. I don't think I expected such a powerful ending. This one made me think. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
These eyes look inside your heart and see the beauty there Lone Wolf, Very well written m'friend....Sending (((((BIG HUGS))))) to you All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan....thank you, kind of feeling that way today... SF...yes, it is and thank you for the compliment.  Lori....wow, always happy to provoke thoughts. Thank you!! Jeffrey...awwe, I see the same in you, m'friend!! Thank you for the kind word sand hugs! {{{HUGS}}} back!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Such longing in these eyes ... nicely portrayed ... sad the view. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The eyes look, the heart feels, and the soul suffers.... ~~very emotional writing LW ~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge - Yes, much longing there and the view is sad now, but tomorrow is a brighter day. Thank you as always for reading. DH - That is it exactly. Feeling very emotional these days. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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