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Strange enzyme
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Strange enzyme Chaos a camel wondering over sands time Sipping lifes juice an oasis enzyme. Chaos pandoras box Gods absolute change grinding infinity to strange. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hhhmmm,...very interesting. Certainly got my mind thinking. Thanks for posting such an intriguing little poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SpitFire, Thanks for posting a comment. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is different and interesting. I like poetry that stops me and makes me think and re-read. This one did for sure. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've never viewed chaos in a camel before, but Pandora's box, well, that opens up an interesting discussion...LOL! Enjoyed, Sy, enjoyed! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantastic, Seymour. I love the way your mind works. Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If the surrounding times and sands are strange to the spirit What is left is to keep peace with ourselves and with those we love. An oasis garden of soul's comfort. Interesting thoughts put in words that only you could write Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Danny, If I made you think then the poem is a success. Thank you. Sunshine, Only a camel coud walk for any period on sands time. Glad you enjoyed. *L* Corinne, What you said made me happy. *L* Elizabeth, And an answer only you could write Love Sy |
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