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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
Forgiveness Once I was loved But loved turned to rage And I caused you pain that day But I never allowed myself to admit it You were my friend, my comfort, my protection And yet I stabbed you with stinging words How could I? I suppose I was jelouse But now I am forgiven Forgiveness is only offered if there is true friendship So now you are my friend, my comfort, my protection So many feelings flow over me now, And yet all I am able to say are two little words But theses two words have the power to heal the deepest wounds of the heart I simply have to say I'm sorry..... |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Wonderful Bunny...those two little words are often the hardest to say. Well done! ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Bunny,...I have to say that out of the couple of poems that you have posted I am impressed. Your work just speaks from the heart,...it's so real...so touching. *Bravo* |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Bunny, Very precise and concise. I liked it . David2  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...sometimes those are the only words we want to hear...and they never come...or they come when it is too late. James |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Bunny, indeed, these two words can stick in one's throat, but they are the honey that heals broken hearts back together. Good work. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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