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Star light. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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star light star bright send the love i seek tonight twinkle twinkle little star together is where our hearts are i wish i may i wish i might feel her love my heart's light up above the world so high her diamond smile makes me sigh star light star bright send the love i seek tonight ----------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Awwwww......how totally SWEET!!! Just rolls off the tongue; thanks for lifting my spirit tonight!  Christina =^..^= |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Just so lovely hope you find the one you seek.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven...hope you find that which you seek, my friend. You deserve it. Great writing... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~~ That was beautiful. Comparing love to the stars is wonderful, for they both have their own beauty. Nicely done."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Very clever, Enjoyed the read. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven,...you crafty little devil,..this is great.  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think even your star is blushing with this one dear... *sweet* I've got my fingers crossed for you!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem.I like your poem very much!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all for your words and for taking the time to reply. . . as always, your words are very encouraging. . . Thank you!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- This was beautiful as always hon!! Gosh I am such an admirer of your work! You write with such passion. Whomever the lucky lady is who lands your heart...I hope she makes you very happy and vice versa! I got my fingers crossed for you. Take care, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
I love this spin on the old lullaby. You are truly such a romantic, and I love reading your work. It is inspiring to see such loving, touching words come from a masculine heart. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Twinkle Twinkle little star, Grant this wish from afar, Starlight, starbright, Grant Sven's wish tonight. Grant him the love he seeks, Let true love shine through, For I can think of no one more deserving, Allow his dreams to come true. Double wishes, double luck? Hope the wish comes true my friend, and a double wish won't hurt!! Can only help...  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Aimster, thank you so much for your reply, I am glad that you enjoy reading me so much. . . and thank you. . . Lori, been a Romantic all of my life. . . but I'm not the only one around here. . . thank you. . . Isis, thank you for your poetic reply my friend. . .and a double wish couldn't hurt. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Sven this is truly lovely enjoyed the read. Hope you find the one you seek. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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