Open Poetry #7 |
Pamela |
hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Pamela I didn't hear your footsteps, approaching from afar. I didn't hear your soft voice call my name. I didn't hear the music of your laughter, on the wind. I didn't hear you coming - but you came. I didn't see the sparkle of the sunlight, on your hair. I didn't see the twinkle in your eyes. I didn't see the moonbeams, as they played across your face. I didn't see the light, 'til you arrived. I didn't know that daily life could be a waking dream. I didn't know that wishes could come true. I didn't know that Heaven could be found upon the earth. I didn't know sheer joy, 'til I met you. I thank you for the many gifts your heart has given mine. I love you more with every passing day. And, now, I hear and see and know the meaning of true peace, For you have come into my soul, to stay. -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved < !signature--> Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm [This message has been edited by hsystems (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Troy! Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... and a very Happy First Mother's Day, Pamela... |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Denise - thanks! It still doesn't do her justice, though. Nan - thank you, from both of us! And Happy Mother's Day to you, as well! Thanks for the kind words, ladies! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aawww,..this is just dandy. Wonderfully written...Happiness to you and your's. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is what's called a real love poem. Excellent work, Troy. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Troy, I love you man...lol and tell Pamela I said hi! great work YOU da man... I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ready this one brought a big smile to my face and some good laughs of happiness...Troy and Pamela forever. James |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, Troy! What a wonderful - sweet - poetic - romantic tribute to Pamela Lucky girl -- Pamela Happy Mother's Day -----kiss that Morgana! netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is just lovely, Troy. You and Pamela are very lucky to have found each other. Wishing you both the best, my friend!! Great piece!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
And incredibly beautiful poem about a love which must be equally lovely. Wow! I wish I could say it as well! Congratulations to you both! |
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