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ashley cain Junior Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 30Texas |
I found a hiding place deep within your soul. I found a friend to confide in with your heart. I found a void in that heart. It was a space. A blackhole. You'd missed something for so long, and I came to fill it up. There was little I could do to prove I loved you, but for some reason you said I did too much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hi ashley, welcome to passions. I related to this poem well, you expressed well the emotions when someone is so lost or hurt from damage that they cant love back and are oten smothered by our love that we try to give them good work here. take vare, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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