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Ecstatic Taboo
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Ecstatic Taboo |
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Don Juan de Feu Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 25 |
Ecstatic Taboo Like the blink of a lash, the escape from a cage of the bird never free, it was gone, no rehash could take back, blank the page, or restore 'used to be'. Innocent, ecstatic utterance of delight, conclusionary name, at once problematic, a knock down drag out fight, one faux pas snuffed the flame and my feet hit the street in the dark. I admit surprise at violence from sweethearts thought discreet, the last place that she bit has not stopped hurting since, reminding the big deal in a name. Not a curse that demeans or derides, nor a slur that would steal her respect, it was worse. A thing which coincides with taboos from the past, once broken, unforgiven. The name at which she seethed, my former lover's last, fired a vengence-driven wrath not to be believed. Send flowers to commend your charming words of praise, best mute, in ecstacy, but should she rapture send and your libido craze, detente diplomacy. --Don Juan de Feu |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW... I love the images in this, you have a very unique writing style. excellent piece. |
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