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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-05-13 07:34 AM


Heart to heart

Heart to heart come to me.
All my heart I give to thee.
You will find that my heart
truly is the most loving part of me.
You are the only woman my heart can see.
My heart comes with a lifetime guarantee.
My heart is full of Love for you from me.
Look into my heart and you'll see...
My heart is true...
It would not dare to mess around.
And my heart could never bear
to let your heart down.
My heart would like to know...
if your heart cares?
My heart is wondering
if your heart has some love to share!!!


Jameslee@May10,2000

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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-13 07:36 AM


Lovely James ----this one is a great read.
I hope that heart has some love to share,
too!

netswan

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2000-05-13 07:37 AM


I hope her heart does "have some love to share" for you James.  She will be a lucky lady indeed, to share a love with your kind soul. Beautiful writing ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-05-13 05:41 PM


Thank you Netswan and Kit for your beautiful hopes.  James
Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-05-13 05:49 PM


Wonderful piece, James.  So full of hope.  I, too, hope that all your love gets shared with the lucky subject of your heartfelt plea.  Excellent writing!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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5 posted 2000-05-13 09:40 PM


this is so perfect because it is SO YOU!!
written with the honest devotion we have come to expect from you SBJ
take care, jm

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-05-14 07:50 PM


Thank you Lone Wolf and Janet for the beautiful responses.  Happy Mothers Day to all.    James
cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30
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Bennett, Colorado USA
7 posted 2000-05-14 08:09 PM


this poem was great!!! I hope she has some love to share also!!!!  Good writing..
   Amanda

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

8 posted 2000-05-14 08:14 PM


~James,...have I ever told you that James is my favorite name?    For some reason it is.  Anyway,...this is lovely...I too hope that her heart has love to share with you,...you are special.
lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
9 posted 2000-05-14 08:15 PM


What a lucky woman!  I'm sure she knows this, and I hope she does share.  This is really beautifully written and full of feeling.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2000-05-14 10:06 PM


Thank you Cutie, Spitfire, and Lori for your wonderful responses.  James
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