Open Poetry #7 |
Heart to heart |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heart to heart Heart to heart come to me. All my heart I give to thee. You will find that my heart truly is the most loving part of me. You are the only woman my heart can see. My heart comes with a lifetime guarantee. My heart is full of Love for you from me. Look into my heart and you'll see... My heart is true... It would not dare to mess around. And my heart could never bear to let your heart down. My heart would like to know... if your heart cares? My heart is wondering if your heart has some love to share!!! Jameslee@May10,2000 |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely James ----this one is a great read. I hope that heart has some love to share, too! netswan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I hope her heart does "have some love to share" for you James. She will be a lucky lady indeed, to share a love with your kind soul. Beautiful writing ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Netswan and Kit for your beautiful hopes. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful piece, James. So full of hope. I, too, hope that all your love gets shared with the lucky subject of your heartfelt plea. Excellent writing!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so perfect because it is SO YOU!! written with the honest devotion we have come to expect from you SBJ take care, jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lone Wolf and Janet for the beautiful responses. Happy Mothers Day to all. James |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
this poem was great!!! I hope she has some love to share also!!!! Good writing.. Amanda |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~James,...have I ever told you that James is my favorite name? For some reason it is. Anyway,...this is lovely...I too hope that her heart has love to share with you,...you are special. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
What a lucky woman! I'm sure she knows this, and I hope she does share. This is really beautifully written and full of feeling. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Cutie, Spitfire, and Lori for your wonderful responses. James |
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