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My Mother
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My Mother |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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I wrote this poem in a hurry, but the sentiment is still there, I gave it to my Mom yesterday.  *MY MOTHER* You may tell me that the stars above do shine radiantly, you may say that the field of roses in the garden do take thy breath away, you may reveal to me a wonder of the world like no other, you may read to me in accented tongue, a love sonnet by Shakespeare, such glory to thine own ears, you may show me all the beauties of life, but none do compare to thy beauty of my Mother. By Melissa Honeybee |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Melissa, you have paid your mother tribute in words and lines that she will treasure forever. It is lovely.... thank you for sharing this! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Melissa - This is wonderful.. I bet your mom loves it.. The beauty of free verse, is that there aren't any rules to break... So it usually works for you...  ... This is very very nice indeed...[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A treasure for your Mother, indeed ... How very beautiful, Melissa .... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ These thoughts would warm the heart of any mother ... they do this one. I'm so pleased that you shared them here. I know your mother found them precious. Mom's are like that ... yeah, we are. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I agree this is very beautiful, your Mom must have glowed with radience after reading it, what a precious gift for you to give her. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Very sweet, I had to shed a tear. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Will you call me Mom? This was wonderful! Lucky woman, your mother. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a beautiful poem for your Mother. James |
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