Open Poetry #7 |
Toxic Dump |
di Morte New Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 8 |
Toxic Dump Observe the effects of enraged, ugly spew on those who deserve kinder brew; in those who've endured undeserved, rough abuse, can love long sustain its misuse? Goodwill starves to death, its remains left to fill dank morgues where old friends dredge despair. The fool, himself first, well-fed face hungry still, is stunned at neglect's noxious fare. --Fr Veni di Morte [This message has been edited by di Morte (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting work here. The images were clear for sure. Welcome to Passions. I hope you'll settle in and stay a long spell. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome To Passions, di Morte! This poem represents a tragedy, that just doesn't have to be -----sometimes we have to let go of past trash and go on with our lives. netswan |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Interesting poem...very dark...welcome to the passions family! Please check your email for a special message. You may want to check out or Dark Passions forum too! |
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di Morte New Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 8 |
greetings, Temptress, netswan and Poet deVine(thank you for the lovely card ))) ) thanks for taking the time to comment, it is appreciated and I am grateful for the encouragement. v |
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