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Poem created simply by loving someone online..
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Poem created simply by loving someone online.. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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Two Souls faces not shown but all emotions are known two souls exploring each, through the distance they reach dreams heard, lives unfold, fears spoken, and passions told forever in the others thoughts, without the other each would be lost a fire stirred within the souls of two, something rare that happens to few... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Welcome to Passions Holly  You've just described getting to know someone from the inside out...you penned it perfectly. Thank you for sharing this! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This is simply sweet and full of emotions. Well written and Welcome to Passions Holly. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Welcome, and what a wonderful poem to start off with. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Holly! What a sentimental sweet poem - a rare love indeed! netswan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions....please check your email for a special message.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome! Been here... it is a good place to be at the time. I like the simplicity here...good work! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Holly, this is just lovely! Simple but warm nonetheless. Glad to have you sharing and posting here, Welcome! You reminded me how good that "online feeling" can feel. Getting to know someone from the inside out - however, it's just not the same as in person. Sometimes, you think you know someone, but you truly don't. That can be good, and sometimes even bad. I know firsthand. I'm so glad your "feelings" are warm! Hope to see more from you!  "Laugh and the world laughs with you..." cry, and you're all alone. My version - pFF |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
I really loved this poem. I have a best friend whos like a brother to me that I met online and talk to every day..This was an awesome poem. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS Hope that you enjoy your stay here. This place is beautiful and hope that you find it that way... By the way, this is a beautiful entry...Looking for more from you!!! Regards, Sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Holly - what a wonderful choice for your first post! This poem is packed with emotion, and has a very good flow. I can also relate to it, having been involved in several online relationships myself (one of them lasted over a year, though we never met "face to face.") Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, and welcome to Passions!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
I just wanted to say thank you to all the responded to my first entry. From reading so many of the poems here, I feel like I am in the best of company. Thank you again for those sweet words! sincerely, -Holly |
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