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Open Poetry #7

My Soul's Decree

ashley cain
Junior Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 30
Texas

0 posted 2000-05-12 10:17 PM

       My mind is shot by all these delusions.
       I've fallen from the branch of sanity.
       My hope, joy, devoured by illusions.
       This love I've felt defies laws of gravity.

       Our restless spirits need each other now.
       My soul needs a beautiful new loved one.
       Your poor little heart wants to find out how.
       If we touvh in sin then all worlds shall shun.

       Must I mention the earth from which you came?
       Must I declare my heart an unknown fortress?
       So I will, for all human laws are lame.
       I consider what is "wrong" very worthless.

               Here it is my sinful decree of love.
               May it not be blasphemous to God above.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2000-05-12 10:52 PM

"Fallen from the branch of Sanity"
Very powerful words here Ashley, through out this entire poem.
Well expressed and written.
Welcome to Passions.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

2 posted 2000-05-13 02:21 AM

Welcome to Passions, Ashley
and such a passionate poem

netswan

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

3 posted 2000-05-13 03:39 AM

Welcome to passions....great first post...can't wait to read more

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2000-05-13 04:49 AM

Great first posting, a dark poem,

"Must I mention the earth from which you came?
Must I declare my heart an unknown fortress?"
I love those lines.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-05-13 08:52 AM

Welcome to the passions family! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message!

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