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Invisible Dance. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Take my hand dance with me Playing our song just for us The people disappear when we're here On the floor you and me Moving as one with the music Eyes on each hands held close Melody takes us to that place Where lovers meet heart in heart Love flows free between our hearts Together my love never to part ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sven, my friend, if this were any other day I would be brimming over with enthusiasm and compliments for you ... but to be honest, I have not the stomach for this sort of bliss right now. Suffice it to say that I'm glad ONE of us is having fun ... LOL  --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sven - This sounds like a dream come true... Nice vision you''ve created here, my friend..  |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Sven ~ Beautiful, descriptive poem...I'm ready to be wisked away to the ball by Prince Charming!!! Wonderful! ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL at Kess's reply..oh come on Kess put on your dancing shoes and trip the light fantastic with sweet Sven... if a dance with him cant cure what ails us... were done for *SMILE* and may I have a dance when your done. perfect poem Sven-gator jm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Short and sweet, Sven. Very nice writing... Great images...  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, such pleasure is found Reading your poems on line CocoBaci |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aaahhh to dance with that special someone, where everyone else in the room disappears....*sigh* How lovely this was sir...Made me smile this morning. Thank you! You painted such a "content" love here. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Kess. . . yes, one of us is having fun, but I look a little silly out here by myself! Come on, you never know, it might make you feel better. . . Nan. . .thank you. . . Kellsue. . . great! Are you sure that you've got your glass slippers? Janet. . .you are definitely next on the card! LW. . . thank you my friend. . . the images just come. . . Coco. . .thank you, I'm glad that you enjoy them. . . Femme. . .glad that I could start your day with a smile . . .and my brush continues to paint. . .------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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