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Sven
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0 posted 2000-05-12 07:18 PM


Take my hand
            dance with me
Playing our song
            just for us

The people disappear
            when we're here
On the floor
            you and me

Moving as one
            with the music
Eyes on each
            hands held close

Melody takes us
            to that place
Where lovers meet
            heart in heart

Love flows free
            between our hearts
Together my love
            never to part

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
1 posted 2000-05-12 07:22 PM


Sven, my friend, if this were any other day I would be brimming over with enthusiasm and compliments for you ... but to be honest, I have not the stomach for this sort of bliss right now.

Suffice it to say that I'm glad ONE of us is having fun ... LOL  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest


Nan
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2 posted 2000-05-12 07:24 PM


Sven - This sounds like a dream come true... Nice vision you''ve created here, my friend..
Kellsue
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3 posted 2000-05-12 08:03 PM


Sven ~ Beautiful, descriptive poem...I'm ready to be wisked away to the ball by Prince Charming!!!  Wonderful!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill



Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-05-12 10:05 PM


LOL at Kess's reply..oh come on Kess put on your dancing shoes and trip the light fantastic with sweet Sven...
if a dance with him cant cure what ails us...
were done for *SMILE*

and may I have a dance when your done.
perfect poem Sven-gator
jm

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5 posted 2000-05-13 02:40 AM


Short and sweet, Sven.  Very nice writing...
Great images...  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

CocoBaci
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6 posted 2000-05-13 02:48 AM


Sven, such pleasure is found
Reading your poems on line

CocoBaci

poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 2000-05-13 09:13 AM


Aaahhh to dance with that special someone, where everyone else in the room disappears....*sigh*  How lovely this was sir...Made me smile this morning.  Thank you!     You painted such a "content" love here.
Sven
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8 posted 2000-05-13 12:37 PM


Thank you all. . .

Kess. . . yes, one of us is having fun, but I look a little silly out here by myself!  Come on, you never know, it might make you feel better. . .

Nan. . .thank you. . .

Kellsue. . . great!  Are you sure that you've got your glass slippers?  

Janet. . .you are definitely next on the card!  

LW. . . thank you my friend. . . the images just come. . .

Coco. . .thank you, I'm glad that you enjoy them. . .

Femme. . .glad that I could start your day with a smile   . . .and my brush continues to paint. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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