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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho

0 posted 2000-05-12 04:25 PM




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
1 posted 2000-05-12 04:37 PM



Oh, honey, this is terrible!
It wrings out the contents of my
heart like a dishrag - sometimes your
sorrow can cast me into a sea of
sadness for your griefs. Very
beautifully written, but
much, much too sad! I
love you so much.




CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-05-12 04:43 PM


Be still my beating heart
This poem just brings my breath to halt
As I read each verse you write
With such emotion and feeling
My oh my, this was exceptional reading.
CocoBaci

REBECCA ALLYN
Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91
Lima,Ohio
3 posted 2000-05-12 05:05 PM


For once in my life I am truly speechless.
This is completly breathtaking

LOTS OF LUV,
Becky

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
4 posted 2000-05-12 05:16 PM


RJ,

Thank you so much sweet heart, and by the way I'm a long way from the graveyard... I hope!

Coco,

I hope you've gotten your breath back, never mind your heart just let it bounce around on the floor awhile.

All kidding aside I have to tell you that my inspiration for this one came from "Hoot Owl's" (Reflections lost) which I do have to say is very tasty. She's one of my teachers but doesn't know it... I didn't pay my tuition this semester and am just sneeking around the back skirts of the 'stute trying to keep a low profile. Sheeesh, I hope I'm not busted.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
5 posted 2000-05-12 05:20 PM


Becky,

You little sneek. Now just look at yourself, if all these people keep losing their breath I'm going to get busted.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

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