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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-05-12 04:25 PM

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

1 posted 2000-05-12 04:37 PM

Oh, honey, this is terrible!
It wrings out the contents of my
heart like a dishrag - sometimes your
sorrow can cast me into a sea of
sadness for your griefs. Very
beautifully written, but
much, much too sad! I
love you so much.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-05-12 04:43 PM

Be still my beating heart
This poem just brings my breath to halt
As I read each verse you write
With such emotion and feeling
My oh my, this was exceptional reading.
CocoBaci

REBECCA ALLYN
Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 91
Lima,Ohio

3 posted 2000-05-12 05:05 PM

For once in my life I am truly speechless.
This is completly breathtaking

LOTS OF LUV,
Becky

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

4 posted 2000-05-12 05:16 PM

RJ,

Thank you so much sweet heart, and by the way I'm a long way from the graveyard... I hope!

Coco,

I hope you've gotten your breath back, never mind your heart just let it bounce around on the floor awhile.

All kidding aside I have to tell you that my inspiration for this one came from "Hoot Owl's" (Reflections lost) which I do have to say is very tasty. She's one of my teachers but doesn't know it... I didn't pay my tuition this semester and am just sneeking around the back skirts of the 'stute trying to keep a low profile. Sheeesh, I hope I'm not busted.

If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

5 posted 2000-05-12 05:20 PM

Becky,

You little sneek. Now just look at yourself, if all these people keep losing their breath I'm going to get busted.

If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

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Oh, honey, this is terrible!It wrings out the contents of myheart like a dishrag - sometimes yoursorrow can cast me into a sea ofsadness for your griefs. Verybeautifully written, butmuch, much too sad! Ilove you so much.

Oh, honey, this is terrible!
It wrings out the contents of my
heart like a dishrag - sometimes your
sorrow can cast me into a sea of
sadness for your griefs. Very
beautifully written, but
much, much too sad! I
love you so much.