Open Poetry #7 |
Side By Side |
Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
"never seek to tell thy love love that never told can be -- " in response to my confessions he has shown me beauty. the first day i saw his eyes they swept me to the sky he stole the flag, he stole my heart "if you want i could fly..." we hugged at midnight in the parking lot it happened to be my last day he held me and told me to keep my head high my dragon's he commenced to slay he wrote to me from a mountain top telling me things about life he sang to me on a busy road the words to American Pie we had some green gel at Swensen's and thought it belonged on our faces we played his piano and sang about flowers as i pondered respective "best friend places." as he graduated and moved up in the world i felt like he left me behind he looked in my eyes and he told me i'd stay forever on his mind the first of next visit we became Tuck and Roll we fought about money and whatnot i was so excited to be near him my place i soon forgot we stayed up 'till breakfast-time talking and sometimes never saying a word he played on the strings of my heart and struck a beautiful chord. we spoke about preconceived notions and matters of the heart we looked deep into our souls that night we were beginning to make a start he's my best friend through words, my lover through looks stands by me with the rise and fall of the tide but no matter what the future holds we'll be forever side by side. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this! I can feel the emotion so strongly. So well written. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A beautiful, touching story in poetry! I loved it! |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
WONDERFUL! you aspire me to love..... very touching work LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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