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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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I came over here tonight to listen to the sound of your heart beating next to mine. I wanted to touch your face and feel your skin slowly caress mine as you slid your body across me. I longed for your tender kisses and gentle whispers in my ear... I came here tonight because I missed you.. and I missed me and you... Christopher M. Grimm Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah, Chris...so sweet and bittersweet, intermingled. Lovely writing... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Claire...long time no see.....lol. Missed you all...glad to be back. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, ChrisG~ Wow ! This sultry render sure makes me glad you're back too. Beautiful .... 'I longed for your tender kisses and gentle whispers in my ear...' Oh, yeah ... like that's my Nytol ! Thanks a lot !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
CM~ Wow! It just got very warm here at my computer!Soooo sweet, very sexy. Me like.  -SEA |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
wow chris -------- hiss in your ear, with a love like that - hold on to it. netswan |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Marge and Sea and swan....your comments are always deeply appreciated... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Chris! Nice to see you again! Denise |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
WoW! I can't even summon words. Such very beautiful work!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Becky and Denise.... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"to listen to the sound of your heart beating next to mine" such lovely thoughts and it keeps getting lovelier and lovelier. I enjoyed reading this romantic, soft and tender poem. James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wanted to touch your face and feel your skin slowly caress mine as you slid your body across me. I longed for your tender kisses and gentle whispers in my ear... I came here tonight because I missed you.. and I missed me and you... ------------ OH MAN!! *sigh* its gonna be along weekend..*smile* I gotta get my hands on a poet LOL this is about the 4th sensual poem Ive read. VERY nice work here... sensual and tender... VERY NICE, take care,jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks Everybody!! chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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