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~When Morning Blooms~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Valleys drenched in silver-green I glimpse within my dreams... Lighted eyes caress the night And beyond forever gleam... Willow limbs embrace the wind Whispering rosy rhymes... A shadow's hint of what's to come Grows thickly sweet with time... His kiss dances, floating free Upon some distant spray... With aching need I search for him Believing he'll come one day... Reverie tinted in faded emerald I enfold myself within... And allow the breeze to softly flirt And rush upon my skin... I close my eyes, unlock my soul Giving trust to destiny... And pray that when morning blooms It will be his face I see... *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
*big dreamy sigh...* This flowed so smoothly, like liquid silk....MY dreams don't even come halfway close to this, LOL. I enjoyed this very much.  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Wow! this is magnificent!! Your words float like that of a beautiful dream....one I wouldn't want to wake up from, but it also shows the longing for the one that we can only reach for in our dreams....very touching. You have a gift thanks for sharing it! |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Beautiful poem!!!!!! I love the use of such vivid words. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
His kiss dances, floating free Upon some distant spray... With aching need I search for him Believing he'll come one day... Reverie tinted in faded emerald I enfold myself within... And allow the breeze to softly flirt And rush upon my skin... I close my eyes, unlock my soul Giving trust to destiny... And pray that when morning blooms It will be his face I see... --------------- K, this is exquisite, it dances like a butterfly or feather in the wind. such fragile longing laced with delicate desire. perfection of your poets pen. take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Total enchanment in your muse's offering You play upon the morning dew phrases fragrant with perfume Delight of early morning roses nightblooming jasmine quietly closes And on his face ... your smile ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
*Sigh* I want some dreams like this. Lovely post Alwye. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...need I say more? |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Alwye this is lovely  thanks for posting such a treasure.~Heather |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much for replying, I appreciate it deeply. JM- A special thanks to you. Having you reply to my work is quite an honor. BTW, that's the first time anyone has ever called me 'K'..lol, I like it. *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
*hangs head in shame* Oh! Such a thing for me to do as miss a poem like this for an entire day? The shame is too much for me to bear! A beautiful poem, Krista and I must agree with the others that it flows beautifully. And if I am not guessing wrong it seems that this poem is about someone? Excellent poem, milady! The Jester, Death Abrahm Simons "You... You are so special You have the talent To make me feel like Dirt" - Alice in Chains, "Dirt" |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Beautiful poem Krista. Just beautiful. I hope your dreams do come true, you deserve it. The best people in the world deserve the best, and you are at the top of that list!!! and the list only changes after number two... so you stuck there. Great poem, I liked it a lot. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting, as always, Krista! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Dusk- Thank you, my gracious friend, for your kind comments. Cassers- Your dreams too deserve to come true. And they will, my friend. Thanks for being my rock to lean on and one of my best friends. Denise- Thank you so much! *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's beautiful, Krista. The way you combine the colors with the thoughts is very striking. Lovely. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like a soft oceanic lover. Sweet. Corinne |
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