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What have you gotten into boy?
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What have you gotten into boy? |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Did you know when you step foot in my life what you were getting yourself into? Were you aware of the extent you would have to go? You want me to trust you,you want me to rearrange my life you are asking a lot of this fragile heart,what if I tell you no? Were you positive that this was going to be simple? You were just going to rush in and take me away? I would automatically believe you and fall at your feet even after all of this,do you really think you will stay? It is sad to say that you get the sorry end of the deal if you want me you need to repair all that I was left with though you had nothing to do with it with you it will silently sit Are you a strong enough man? Can you handle all of this baggage that comes along with the person I am? Are you willing to sacrifice your sanity to be with me? You will be knocked down more times than you will walk You might as well crawl There is a picture I'm painting,can you see? Do you want me to fall in live with you? Because I believe I am Don't let me fall by myself |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Rebecca, You've done it again. I like your style and the things you write about. Keem 'em coming. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Lori, You are such a sweetheart!! Thanks again! Lots Of Luv, Becky |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am fast becoming a fan of your work. I agree with Lori, Keep ém coming!  Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fascinating look into your mind and your heart. James |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I really can relate to this. Baggage is so hard to get rid of but with the right guy (or girl) it can be done. I hope he has really large shoulders and I hope he falls with you.Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Rebbeca! It was nice. When you're love you really don't feel the pain or burden. Its a wonderful realtionship where you'll find a magic cure for eveything. Just share it until your heart becomes heart and you'll just start loving forgetting all this pain. You'll find one. Just carry on until then. Sincerely A_L |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Yeah...what they all said...keep 'em coming All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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