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Swimming with Sharks
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Swimming with Sharks |
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daveste New Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 3 |
She swam with the fishes, but fishes they were not. For in the sea she could not see that dangers must be fought. She swam and swam each day at work until that fateful day. That perception changed and her blue world became a shade of gray. She thanks the Lord for steering her from sea to bay to shore. Now she looks back and sees she’s walk yet through another door. Her time is done swimming in the murky pond of lies and disbelief For now dear friend she has a job that provides her with no grief. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
daveste, Hello and welcome to Passions!! Very interesting post. I like it. Glad to hear your friend got out of the water and away from the sharks. Great writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Welcome to the Jaws of Passions. The sharks here only eat up poetry. And I think we will always be hungry for more of your poetry. So keep feeding us. |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
Wow that sound like something that I have gone through.This was a great one. Tricia |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I agree....this was an interesting piece. Full of mystery and great imagery. Welcome to Passions and I look forward to reading more from you! Take care, Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions Daveste: What a great poem to catch our attention. Thanks for sharing netswan |
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