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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~You~ You itch I scratch you spill I clean you fall I hug you cry I wipe you sick I fix you hungry I feed you sleep I watch. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is beautiful. It makes me think of children and part of the day they may go through. To watch them sleep gives a parent a wonderful feeling. A parent always wants to be there for their children and this poem says it. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ as a Mom, the automatic responses to each need is what I can relate to so well,3 times over!  I really like this one.....she says while printing!!  -SEA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you both for sweet replies...I don't have any children yet but I take care of them and can relate I think that when I originally wrote it it was for someone I love lots. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SpitFire, Excellent, 24 karat gold. |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
Very good here.It does make me think so much of my four little ones. Tricia |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Wonderful, wonderful poem!  I love children, needy souls that they are! ~Heather |
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