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...Where does it Lead you...?
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...Where does it Lead you...? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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...Where does it Lead you...? ...when I ask certain questions... and leave a leading line... does it cause you to pause, and wonder where my mind then goes, or do I leave a question yet to be asked... does it give you hope... or is it a task to think “here, she is strange, leaving little ellipses around like fallen soldiers to the ground...” ...but did they lead you here...? To see what is said? and do they leave open in your mind any questions in your head? ...or perhaps...just perhaps it is a line of hope... whether in summary, or in form of a rope left for you to hang from... something for you to think about while I am gone... 10 May 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, it definetely kept me hanging on.  The ending is a tease if ya ask me. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute..someone said I'm doing more ellipses lately....hmm....wonder what he meant by that...hm....could it be?...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and hes gonna miss ya when your gone too.  LOVE the poetic sarcasim in this one Sun. they can be so dense? yes? yes! *smile* take care,jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes all we can do is hang on and hope for the best. Take care and hurry back |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
well, this one was fun...to see all of the different responses it evoked...I'm not going anywhere...and there was no "he" to choke... |
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