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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I like the tang of disintegration; Tang being the aftertaste of something worthwhile, Tang being the length a blade travels into its handle. We should lie together more often; Lie being close voluntarily to see what happens, Lie being what we said to get in that state to begin with. I told you I like the shape of clouds; Clouds being areas of condensed, colored moisture in the sky; Clouds being where you lost your wallet (you thought I said crowds). I think I might love you, collapse and all. What can you say to that? Exactly; what can you say? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woah man i like this if it hurts the head its good in my book |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks, walt.Mike (and i have plenty of aspirin) |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
hey, i like this one alot. good question to end with, it answers itself. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I like the tang of disintegration; Tang being the aftertaste of something worthwhile, -------------- We should lie together more often; Lie being close voluntarily to see what happens, Lie being what we said to get in that state to begin with. ----------- I think I might love you, collapse and all. What can you say to that? Exactly; what can you say? ------------- well-- I can say I love this poem and the tangy aftertaste it left in my mouth... man I so enjoy when you write like this... and may I say I am OH so honored to get a read and reply outta you ... thanks...you can come play in caps any time ya like... and that line was nothing against prose... it was to mean how hard the muse would have to work... got nothin against prose... other than Im no good at it... as you can see the way I ramble on on your posts each nite LOL later cool poet... jm/bs..with the candy buttons LOL try writing a poem about that ... love your nick names  ok, Im really going this time... SEE YA. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Lucius, Glad you enjoyed; and thanks. Butterfly Slippers, I'll have to think about it -- writing a poem about candy-button faces. Of course, I still need to use "butterfly slippers" in a poem somewhere, too. I think the only two names I've used successfully so far are "january flowers" (waaaay back) and "serenity" <-- but that's an easy one. And you don't need to feel "honored," I went to read your poem. We're friends, after all. If anything, be "surprised" I found some free time. And now my arm is a shooting pain. Better get to sleep. Later, Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Re: regarding comment to Butterfly Slippers, regarding serenity being an "easy" one--- OKAY!!! love the poem--as always, you pose seemingly easy questions that have difficult answers... love the mind-bend in that....thanks... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey sweet serenity... he meant easy on the mind...*smile* good night me twin... your just getting up me thinks LOL... and Im crashing... night BSQ thanx.jm/bs |
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