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~ Fly Baby Angel ~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Fly Baby Angel ~ Fly baby angel - mom's coming home soon I'm hitching a ride on the beam's of our moon. Play hopscotch & jumprope Till mommy gets there We'll dance in the clouds - ballet in the air. Fly baby angel - I loved you so dear Your wings have grown strong, so fly without fear. Now play with the angels Till mommy gets home And know that in heaven - you're never alone. Fly baby angel - you're still in my heart Though we're not together, we're never apart. Now close tiny eyes and get angel sleep So you won't see mommy - break down here to weep... To my baby girl, Laisha Denea. Lost August 1991 - poetFemmeFatale May 8, 2000 "Laugh and the world laughs with you..." cry, and you're all alone. My version - pFF |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Gen, sweetie,I had no idea... Im moved to having no words... the poem is breath taking,and perfect love and hugs sent your way my poetic friend. jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
PFF-- if i can get past the lump in my throat, i'll try to post you a decent reply to this. this was so incredibly sad yet tender, and very beautiful. i can't imagine the pain of losing a child. i am glad to know that you are able to let your feelings go in poetry. take care! amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Femme, I had no idea! I'm so sorry! This is absolutely beautiful! I'd love to post this on my poetry memorial bereaved site - it would be a real honor, to honor your little girl. It's called "Coming Through the Fire", and it's at http://www.angelfire.com/zine/bereaved/index.html ~ ~ ~ Again, this is exquisite, and the last lines brought tears to my eyes. ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beautiful...I really don't know what else to say except I'm sure the Moon's beam and the Sun's rays keep heaven in constant warmth and light... Bless PFF Big HUGS |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gen...this is beautiful. Hugs dear, one day you will hold your littlest angel in your arms and she will lovely smile at her mother knowing that she was always loved. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh Gen...I'm so very sorry Hun. This brought both tears and a smile. Tears because such a loss is so devastating, so sad. I couldn't even begin to understand the pain, even though I'm a mom. Even though there is sorrow, this poem is so precious and sweet. To know that your baby girl is in heaven, not alone, a little angel. That is what made me smile. What a beautiful tribute you have made to her here. Warm Hugs to you from me ~Sheri |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm so sorry Femme...these are beautiful words of Love right from your heart going to Laisha on angel wings. Take care. James |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh James...just when I had stopped crying over posting this, you made me up and start again...thank you though for such a sweet reply. That means so much to her, I know. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Femme, I am sure your little one knows just how loved she was. It takes courage to bare yourself like this. Excellent work also. David2 |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, this is so sad, but so full of hope. I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope writing this helped you. *hugs* "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Such a touching and loving poem...it brought tears to my eyes. I'm sorry for your loss...I know your little angel must be soaring around Heaven telling all the other angels about her wonderful Mother who loves her so much and that she watches over you every day. Sad but sweet poem. Her spirit lives in all things beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. ~Kellsue  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Gen, this is absolutely precious. I'm glad you wrote this for her. HUGS Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have brought tears to my eyes with your lovely poem to your daughter. I know how hard it is to have this pain that never goes away, but this poem is full of the knowing that love lasts forever. My poem Breath Unplugged was about this lasting. Hugs! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
[HUGE sighs] Speachless as well. Thanks for sharing. I'm sure your daughter is proud to have such a talented mother, I know I would be. [sigh] Man I want to say so much more bit the words just aren't there. {{{ HUGS }}} --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Gen, i am at a loss for words. my thoughts and prayers are with you now. This was truly beautiful....I'm sure she makes heaven a very special place. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Gen, what can I say? This just made me stop dead in my tracks. . . there really are no words. . . My heart goes out to you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
never alone in heaven! this is beautiful- |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pFF~ what can I say after reading this? I'm so devestated by the emotional impact this had on me.......a mom myself, I just can't even think of what you must feel every single day. {{{HUGS}}} for you, and a big hunk of my heart.-SEA |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Those who are gone are not forgotten, and those who have gone before will wait for us on the other side and weep for our fear, cry for our sorrow, but smile for our victory when we move toward them. Bless you sis. Beautiful poem. I can only think that she's sitting on Jerry Don's lap and just playing... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I'm so sorry, I feel such saddness and loss for you. This poem was filled with such a hope and prayer and was just beautiful it just captures my heart and soul. love to you...Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so lovely PoetFemme ... blessed are the days that you shared with you little one, and blessed are the thoughts that you will share with her once again, amongst the angels. Thank you so much for sharing this ... With much hugs, /Kit |
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