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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Acceptance A forest green, A hammock slung, Obtuse release. Acceptance A billowed sail, A blind held scale, Peace. Approval, A giant step, A planted seed, Gentle rain. Assent. Ratification, Negotiated time, A rainbows walk, Consent. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You have gone full circle with this one...so much said in so few words  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
A very unique list of peaceful phrases, that just make me want to *sigh* at the end...Quite creative sir. I tried to do something like this not too long ago, but it really flopped! Needless to say, I wadded it up, and in the can it went.  Yours turned out nicely though. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I REALLY love this Seymour---soft imagery strung lightly but perfectly together---poetic lace...lovely work... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, what a nice comment, thank you *L* Pff, Thank you for the sweet comment. *L* Serenity, A lovely comment, thank you. *L* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Smooth as silk, Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how serene & calming... like a meditation mantra to relax... very cool Sy-guy..very. jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I don't know what to say... Life is tough Sy, but your better. Nice work. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is very unusual. Beautiful. I'm especially drawn to the line "A blind held scale", because if the one holding the scale could not see it, there could be no judging. Acceptance. Lovely imagery. Lovely poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Milk and honey and on the money. Thanks. Janet, Why thank you mam. *L* Lucky, Thank you for the nice. Rosemary, Thank you for the unusual and beautiful. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A poem to be read over and over Very lovely, Sy Liz |
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