Open Poetry #7 |
retraction |
danny Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 18 |
LOSS when once i gave i now retract a soul now broken once intact my spirit lit now has burned for torment grows when love is spurned i seek a face in seas of masks yet visions new are blocked by past looks are given smiles returned and still my eyes are downward turned a concious loss of self and worth sustains decay in place of birth where hope once ruled now reigns despair the home of pride is now griefs lair a shore upon i felt delight becomes a desert harsh with spite where hearts beauty filled my senses now all is lost behind pains fences < !signature--> [This message has been edited by danny (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Danny! Nothing can destroy your soul. Love will cause pain accept it and you'll find that love is a wonderful feeling. Sincerely A_L |
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danny Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 18 |
this is an old one guys but thanks for the kind words a-l |
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