Open Poetry #7 |
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Her Knowing Smile |
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H. Arlequin Member
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Her Knowing Smile The heavy cloying, semi-sickening closeness of honeysuckle on that hot and humid night hung its sweaty sweetness like cooling cane sorghum drips in spring. His angry self-serving verboseness echoing stentorian spousal shibboleths of right and wrong, filial dereliction and indecorum, crinolines and freshly brushed hair flying, trying to catch up, she disembarked their solemn pledges' ship. Her slaver captain's clanky chains, his impotent upraised hand, the rage that masked a prowess dying, propelled her from the house to yard and night, a trip more to than from. After unfulfillment, against somnolent unilateral disregard and unrequited passion, her undiminished fire escaped coition's cul-de-sac, to anywhere. She strode into her garden's perfumed wall of scent, decrying fates' abusive sexual ration as amoral and unfair. The moon diffused the black until the weeping willow, its bridal veil a call to step within, had wooed and stopped her rushing. The arching branches, their bowing lacy fronds a queen's boudoir had made, whose honoree complied. Despite the tumultuous egress, deprivation blushing its appall, an other-worldly quietude, free of bonds, free of all outside herself, basal needs supplied within the psyche, effusively, well-being annointing her, soundlessly called out that she must feel...to celebrate herself, speed Artemis from the glen, Venus to arise, the manly eyes from passion's balconade all wanting her. Without thought, the detached graceful hands initiate the loosing, the piling at her feet, without suprise the step away from all that had so recently repressed, an undressed nymph, a confining chrysallis was let go, Eve's imago, nimbus its own light. Too tiny to be seen, each of ten million downy hairs, found its vocal quest, clamoring, celebrating life, as fervid passions flow into her flesh. She moves, a wanton wraith, the screen of willow walls, behind, glissading down the garden path, her music maestro playing in her ear, a knowing smile the finished touch for Eden's newest star. On and on within the arms of unseen gods who vied for her, wrath of losers nil, a woman rose above her entourage, her style, the elegant proportionate de Milo provided gods a canon for those who'd follow. Before the dawn, she stopped, as if chatting, waiting, and held aside the bower's frond in lascivious anticipating. Passive, she could not be, but in Priapus' Olympian adoration, passion's threshold dropped, the endless satiation mounting, ebbing, building beyond satyric dreams. At dawn she was alone, a weeping tree her canopy, clasped hands beneath her head, she stretched luxuriously, the knowing smile in place, arose and dressed. A consort of the pantheon in passions' panegyric, who knew those arms, whose wisdom's charms had fetched from her enticing repartee and more, would never be depressed again, should dotage husband indulge in his choleric. --Don Juan de Feu . . . . . . . Poems from the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm [This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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"Too tiny to be seen, each of ten million downy hairs, found its vocal quest, clamoring, celebrating life, as fervid passions flow into her flesh." ______ This gave me "goosebumps", and I'll humbly admit ... sent me running for the dictionary more than once. I very much enjoyed this incredibly descriptive piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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