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Open Poetry #7

True Love

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-05-08 10:13 AM

Love is so suspicious,so pretentious,
so mind boggling to my soul.
Is it worth the agony, the joy, the not knowing.
Being lost in the haze.
If only my mind did not survey all the definitions of my soul.
Then would not ache all over,
and toss in my sleep to and fro.
Love is a gift .
So why do I not receive with gladness?
Or am I afraid of knowing the true love.
Knowing how it feels to run through my veins,
like a water fall.
I must open up my heart like a sponge,
to know the meaning of true love
and so must we all.

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

1 posted 2000-05-08 10:26 AM

***rosebud,
this poem is heartfelt and rendered so beautifully.
i doubt that love will ever be fully comprehended, just know that whatever happens in your life, you will always be among friends.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-05-08 10:52 AM

You've got some beautiful lines here...Love is definantly a subject that will be pondered for all time!! Take care!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-05-08 10:52 AM

thank you so much, I guess your right I believe sometimes I love so much thats where I'm inspired to write, when my feelings can't show . It helps to write them down. Thanks so much Mete, I really love this netpoem site and reading others poetry. This was one of my first poems written.I wrote back in January. Poetry is food for my heart and soul.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-05-08 10:55 AM

thanks Devina, I know I feel like I could write and write on the subject the definition of love has many many meaning glad you enjoyed. As I told mete out I just love poetry .. ABSOLUTELY LOVE now that is love.. hehe

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