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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The soft sounds of summer leaves That dance in the forest cathedral Songs of birds never heard Resound in the forest primeval A place within this world untouched Never seen by human eyes A pristine place that hides my soul Where Angels wings are sighs Worldly is my everyday name But my heart holds a passion true Every day, every moment I live, I live to love just you. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely description -- Poet devine And a truly sweet poem, sigh. netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
PD... this is an exquisite jewel of a poem!! I love this beautiful piece... and that last line...DIVINE. much like the poet who wrote it. truly lovely in its imagery and emotions. take care, jm |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* (doing a lot of that tonight) This is just too beautiful for words deVine. . . a definite departure for you. . .please come back and visit anytime. . . Beautiful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
simple, beautiful, open-heart poem....just enuff said... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Now THIS would be a great e-card or I think you should submit it to the main site and ALSO to the Blue Mountain Arts site. It is a lovely, lovely poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nice poet d i love it much |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it all, PdV - but especially the second stanza - the "pristine place that hides my soul"... very nice indeed..  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Very sweet poem - sigh - . The ' Where angels wings are sighs '. Part is very nice, I have a presence in every poem, a little touch of goodness, piece and sanity . Where an angel touchs only good will come . Thanks very much, it was a great read, that made me tingle . L.of.L. Tom . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Every day, every moment I live, I live to love just you." I'll take about $1,000 dollars worth of that devotion...as I ....sigh.....James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon,this is a truly beautiful piece,especially love these lines ..... Worldly is my everyday name But my heart holds a passion true Every day, every moment I live, I live to love just you. and I agree with Marge  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely indeed, Sharon! Just lovely!! Denise |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
i think i was there once in a dream..... -tom |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem, PdV. Holds a mystic essance about it. "Worldly is my everyday name" - says it all for me. Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good stuff! |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
The line "A place within this world untouched Never seen by human eyes", really caught my attention. Physical places and emotional places. I enjoyed this one. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Sharon, This is short and beautifully sweet. Thank you for this. |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
I agree with Marge... send it in. Kevin "Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there." |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is beautiful, second stanza my favorite but the last line really brings it full circle. I agree it would be a lovely e-card |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"a pristine place that hides my soul where angels wings are sighs" This PdV is profound and expressed with such elegance. CocoBaci |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poet deVine, Wow....wonderful piece. So soft and sweet!! Really liked it. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all kindly for reading and replying to this! I will consider sending it to Blue Mountain...Gosh! I am blown away that you all liked it so much! Thanks guys!!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PDV...this is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awww, you're showing that romantic side ya know? I Love it!!! The end just grabs your heart  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Sharon, it felt almost as if I could have written that poem, I love the way you describe nature and love all together rolled into one beautiful literary package. Exactly my sorta, favorite, wonderful poem! Kudos ~H |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
P.S. THIS should be on a greeting card.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poet~ Everyone has already said it.....the feelings this piece gives is of love, pure and simple....wonderful.... -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
PD, truer words of love were never written. I just love the feel and flow of this. I says so much about the passion of love. Parker |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Poet deVine, You are going to make me cry! You always have a way of touching my heart, my friend! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
PdV, Excellent! Beautiful imagery and emotion. You blew me away! Love the angel wing sighs. Jester |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Again, this blows me away to have this piece so well received!!! I am so grateful to you all for you kind words! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I'm glad I saw this this morning...what a beautiful wrapping of writing and loving...yes, definitely submit it, as Marge suggested. Wonderful work, Poet D. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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