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On The Monotony Of Familiar Lovers
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On The Monotony Of Familiar Lovers |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Animal instinct passion and lust groping hands pelvic thrust... Kiss the neck, stroke the thigh, listen to your lover sigh... Passion flared, desire breeds, Pacify the body's needs. Kiss and tell. Love and sell. Lover's love, become your hell... So what if the game grows old? just close your eyes, release your soul, and screw until your blood runs cold... Nothing to it. Sleep right through it. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ouch Serenity ------ a good lover one could never sleep through NO Matter how unnew it is ---) netswan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The only way to describe the change of direction in this poem is lying out a summer's day and having a litre of artic water be suddenly poured all over you. Sex without love is indeed pointless and worthless. Great poem, I loved the pacing. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
LOL!!!!!!!!! i love this...!!!!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
DAMN!!! well, get me all hot and bothered and then kick me out of bed *smile* this is awesome girl... those last two lines... perfection. glad I didnt read this late last night... dont think I would have slept later sweet poet-girl. jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, I can feel the sting of this one. . . quite pointed. . . full of power. . .excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I loved this one, dear... Gads - that last line almost hurts to think about...LOL Michael |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sheesh! Haven't these people ever heard of CREATIVITY...? LOL Methinks at this point, another lover is in order ... as I don't think it would be possible for it to become "hell" with someone you actually cared for ... one would hope that in that case the lack would have been noticed, and steps taken to correct the problem ... but then maybe that's just me...? Not sure whether to giggle or cluck my tongue and shake my head, here, girl ... let's hope this isn't autobiographical! (If it is, see advice above -- LOL)  --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
netswan---do 20 years and call me in the morning....smiles... brian-----and yes, that is EXACTLY how it feels... pandora---(grinning now) the irony of PANDORA replying to THIS--LOVE IT. j. marie--I think I know you know, y'know? Sven------Thanx Sveetie--tho I am convinced that you couldn't possibly relate. Michael---Aren't you glad I didn't blame THIS one on you? ROFLMAO..AHHAHA. kess------methinks everyone here has heard of creativity---was someone else I had in doubt---but thanks, and worry not, I exit smiling... Thanks to all...glad that no one was offended (well, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF ONE...AHHAHA... |
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