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Fantasy in the Night
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~ Fantasy In The Night ~ < !signature-->Lost and found I am in browneyes As fiery passions burns inside My soul whispering as I lay in his arms With him beside me is where I belong. He leans towards me stroking my mane The warmth of his body sends a shiver thru my veins He comforts yet teases as I bend at my knees What he does to my essence means nothing to me For it is his love that I seek and I need. I thrive each passing day To have him caress me in his ways His touch upon my thighs His breath upon my breasts His lips upon my lips Seem to bring me to a passionate bliss. I search for words to describe The feelings I get when he enters inside My soul and heart cannot contain The flames of passion that only he can tame. The only sounds that can be heard Are the fainted echoes of pleasing sighs Sharing a fantasy in the night. CocoBaci [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Yes that was hot, Love is a powerful thing when it is genuine. I loved the natural flow of your poem, the images great stuff. it certainly got my blood running. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* oh yea...big ole *sigh*... you write most passionately my dear... very nice...hope its not too hot  take care, jm |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ok, I want to know what's gotten into everybody around here. . . what's with all of these passionate longing poems? CocoBaci, this is just too excellent. . . you have done very well with this one. . . Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, yep...my wife's looking over my shoulder so all I can say is ...yep, yep, yep!! But "thoughts" are wonderful. j. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
ah yes!!! this is a sweet ballad of love... very fine... thank you for sharing! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Janet, Pandora, Swan,Brian, Sven, and Wesley I am thrilled that somehow this passion I write has reached out to you tonite. Thank you for your kind comments and thoughts as your feedback can only inspire one ~ To feel ~ To write ~ To explore ~ CocoBaci [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Coco -- I read this one when you first posted -- It was very passionate,and was wondering if it would be allowed in the open forum. So don't see that it wasn't censored, so let me just say -- this is a beautiful piece netswan |
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